(A) Child care
(B) With child care
(C) Child care as
(D) Being the Child care was
(E) With child care’s being
Awkwardness/wordiness + Modifiers
A: “Child care” incorrectly acting as appositive for “more businesses”.
C: “Child care as…, more companies are focusing…”à awkward.
D and E: Wordy and awkward.
B: “With child care…, more companies are focusing…”
Best choice. “With child care…” correctly modifies “more companies…”
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