(A) Like John McPhees works, Ann Beattie painstakingly assembles in her works
(B) Like John McPhee, Ann Beatties works painstakingly assemble
(C) Like John McPhee, Ann Beattie painstakingly assembles in her works
(D) Just as John McPhees, so Ann Beatties works painstakingly assemble
(E) Just as John McPhee, Ann Beattie painstakingly assembles in her works
Solution:
Comparison + Idioms
A: works incorrectly compared to Ann Beatie.
B: John McPhee incorrectly compared to works.
D: Just as X, so Y is not idiomatic.
E: "As" is used to compare when a subject and verb follows: Joe has a cat, as does Mary
Like is used to compare only nouns: Joe has a cat, as does Mary.
C: Like correctly compares two nounsà John McPhee and Ann Beattie. Hence, C is the best choice.
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