(A) like a spinning figure skater whose speed increases when her arms are drawn in
(B) like the increased speed of a figure skater when her arms are drawn in
(C) like a figure skater who increases speed while spinning with her arms drawn in
(D) just as a spinning figure skater who increases speed by drawing in her arms
(E) just as a spinning figure skater increases speed by drawing in her arms
Solution:
Comparison**
Processes are being compared and thus, as is needed. Hence, A, B, and C can be eliminated.
D is wordy and awkward due to the unnecessary use of who.
E is the best choice.
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