(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
Solution:
A can be eliminated due to unnecessary usage of are in than are other graduates.
B changes the meaning of sentence by who plan on practicing.
D and E are indirect and wordy due to use of it is four times
C is the best choice here.
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