A tricky Sentence Correction question
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Stage II | Sentence Correction | Q 104
Like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, about a Native American who receives the gift of immortality, was an abject failure.
A. Like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, about
B. As have many successful authors, the first of Salman Rushdies novels, Grimus, about
C. Just as with many successful authors, the first of Salman Rushdies novels, Grimus, about
D. Just like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, on
E. As did many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, on
Question: Aren't all the 5 options incorrect? I sense an error in the modifier.
Solution:
A. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
B. 'Incorrect comparison between novel and authors. 'have' indicates that authors have done something, but then it continues with 'the novel'.
C. Correct. "Just as with my brother, my job is well paying too." This is the structure this option follows and there is nothing wrong. Note that without a 'with', it will be an incorrect option. I must agree though that this is a little akward in usage, but the most correct in this context.
D. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
E. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
Correct choice would be C.
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Stage II | Sentence Correction | Q 104
Like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, about a Native American who receives the gift of immortality, was an abject failure.
A. Like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, about
B. As have many successful authors, the first of Salman Rushdies novels, Grimus, about
C. Just as with many successful authors, the first of Salman Rushdies novels, Grimus, about
D. Just like many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, on
E. As did many successful authors, Salman Rushdies first novel, Grimus, on
Question: Aren't all the 5 options incorrect? I sense an error in the modifier.
Solution:
A. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
B. 'Incorrect comparison between novel and authors. 'have' indicates that authors have done something, but then it continues with 'the novel'.
C. Correct. "Just as with my brother, my job is well paying too." This is the structure this option follows and there is nothing wrong. Note that without a 'with', it will be an incorrect option. I must agree though that this is a little akward in usage, but the most correct in this context.
D. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
E. Incorrect comparison between novel and authors
Correct choice would be C.
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