132. As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money
Solution:
Awkwardness*
B is awkward in people have more and more been investing
C is passive and indirect.
D is weird in More and more, when investors
E is wordy and awkward.
A is the best choice.
Sentence Correction - 1000 Questions with Solution:
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money
Solution:
Awkwardness*
B is awkward in people have more and more been investing
C is passive and indirect.
D is weird in More and more, when investors
E is wordy and awkward.
A is the best choice.
Sentence Correction - 1000 Questions with Solution: