162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
Solution:
Modifiers**
A and B can be eliminated for unnecessary use of ing form.
D is wrong as Carefully coordinated is modifying Beatrix Potter.
E is wordy and awkward.
C is the best choice.
Sentence Correction - 1000 Questions with Solution:
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
Solution:
Modifiers**
A and B can be eliminated for unnecessary use of ing form.
D is wrong as Carefully coordinated is modifying Beatrix Potter.
E is wordy and awkward.
C is the best choice.
Sentence Correction - 1000 Questions with Solution: