485. Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relations in modern society.
(A) Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(B) Like Rousseau, Tolstois rebellion was
(C) As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(D) As did Rousseau, Tolstois rebellion was
(E) Tolstois rebellion, as Rousseaus, was
Solution:
OG Solution:
In choice A, the best answer, a clear and logical comparison is made between Rousseau and Tolstoi. Choice B illogically compares a person, Rousseau, to an event, Tolstoi's rebellion. Also, Tolstoi's rebellion was against is less direct than Tolstoi rebelled against. Inserting did after As would make C grammatical. Because As is a conjunction, it must introduce a clause; hence the noun Rousseau must have a verb. Choice D compares an implied action (As did Rousseau) with a noun (Tolstoi's rebellion). Choice E is awkwardly formed, and like is needed in place of as to compare two nouns (rebellion is understood after Rousseau's). Also, Tolstoi's rebellion... was against is less direct than Tolstoi rebelled against.
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(A) Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(B) Like Rousseau, Tolstois rebellion was
(C) As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(D) As did Rousseau, Tolstois rebellion was
(E) Tolstois rebellion, as Rousseaus, was
Solution:
OG Solution:
In choice A, the best answer, a clear and logical comparison is made between Rousseau and Tolstoi. Choice B illogically compares a person, Rousseau, to an event, Tolstoi's rebellion. Also, Tolstoi's rebellion was against is less direct than Tolstoi rebelled against. Inserting did after As would make C grammatical. Because As is a conjunction, it must introduce a clause; hence the noun Rousseau must have a verb. Choice D compares an implied action (As did Rousseau) with a noun (Tolstoi's rebellion). Choice E is awkwardly formed, and like is needed in place of as to compare two nouns (rebellion is understood after Rousseau's). Also, Tolstoi's rebellion... was against is less direct than Tolstoi rebelled against.
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